By: David Kanter (dkanter.delete@this.realworldtech.com), August 19, 2011 9:16 pm
Room: Moderated Discussions
A Hobbit (multiballer@gmail.com) on 8/19/11 wrote:
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>But you really need to break things up. Your paragraph spacing and lack of indents
>made my eyes crawl out of my skull, turn towards their sockets, and stab my brain until I was a drooling heap.
>
>I'll be fine, but only after extensive surgery. The article itself is brilliant
>and I enjoyed what I could read before my eyes, well... you get the idea.
>
I made a few changes and it definitely screwed it up. I'll probably fix this later tonight or over the weekend.
David
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>But you really need to break things up. Your paragraph spacing and lack of indents
>made my eyes crawl out of my skull, turn towards their sockets, and stab my brain until I was a drooling heap.
>
>I'll be fine, but only after extensive surgery. The article itself is brilliant
>and I enjoyed what I could read before my eyes, well... you get the idea.
>
I made a few changes and it definitely screwed it up. I'll probably fix this later tonight or over the weekend.
David
